Nova-Hawk's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[CC ACR: Red vs Dark Red]

Great

Great for your first submission.
I gave it a 5, hope to see more in the near future.

Metalbug responds:

Thank you!

[Windows XP (big project)]

Not the worst thing ever....

.... but not the best either.

You need to first, take your time with making the graphics slightly better. I know if it is your first submission you will be excited and want to get in on Newgrounds as quick as you can. But don't. It will be much better if you take your time with it.

Secondly you need to check for spelling errors. There are some errors in there, be careful to read through everything again to check.

Finally, give it some sort of storyline. I know it is meant to be like a dig at Windows saying Linux is better, but some people might not understand. The storyline in this flash is a little vague and it would be better if you came up with an original idea and thought everything through. Like i said, take your time!

You did have a preloader and a replay button so that's good, you are using some basic actionscript!

kidpaddle59 responds:

i use some basic actionscript in windows VISHIT !

[AngelRyuVS.EvilRyu]

Best sprite movie i've seen!

Awesome work here!
I don't think i have seen a better sprite movie, excellent job!

I favorite it

azn-sk8er-dude responds:

Thanks dude..... Expect more from me

[Ultimate random crapiness]

Was cool

I enjoyed it, but you really need to add music or sounds as i didn't hear any, overall good though

ZayanuZaroc responds:

Thank you and I will add sound and music! :D

[Hadriani - Feeld]

ok a bit wierd

Just played music while i watched it move around the screen, it would be better if it had more choice of music, but it wasn't the worst thing i've seen today

But i guess its not all bad for your first project!

saxpro responds:

I'll make the next one with more music
ty 4 review!

Saxpro

[Line Life 5]

It was ok

Good animation, but a little but random, didn't really understand what it was about.

But thumbs up for the animation, very smooth.

F-Ninja responds:

my flash have no purpose o_o lol

[Good Shepherd Logo]

Good animation.....

......but a little random, i can see that you have a trailer of some sort just submitted aswel, which i will check out, but this was slightly too pointless to me, sorry

Tamasan responds:

I understand. When I think movie, I think the feature, not the motiongraphics and credits. Thanks for the review.

[DanceMan]

Cool, good for your first flash

Nice work for your first flash, dont understand why he gets a guitar out for dance music, but i liked this all the same, keep it up.

wallsandfloors responds:

lol thanks, Just wanted to put a guitar bit in to be honest lol.